APH: Liet: Toris

Hi! I haven't wrote many critiques before so I hope this is okay.
Firstly I would like to say excellent profile; it is nice to see someone take such care over the nose shape and mouth. The only critism I can make of the face is that perhaps the eye is a little too wide? From this angle the width of the eye is shortened a little bit.
I like how you have drawn Liet's hair, tie and jacket flowing consistantly with the wind and all in the same direction. Again, there is only critism of the anatomy; I feel his shoulder may a little too forward; it needs to be moved back slightly so the central/highest point on his shoulder is behind his ear.
In all though, I like the way you've drawn this with a variety of thick lining and thinner- I particularily love how the lines of his tie are not as dark; it seems right to me as it would be constantly moving in the wind. I also really like how your shading on his back corresponds to the direction of light.
Before writing this I quickly looked through your gallery, and I can tell you are improving all the time! Keep it up! Great art! ^^